My decisions really meant something, back then
A Tale From My Youth
It’s a terrible day.
I am alone, thinking.
It can’t be put off;
They’re waiting, downstairs.
They’re calling my name.
Summoning my resolve,
I march to the top of the stairs,
Look down at my parents, my friends,
Their upturned faces
Looking at me,
“I’m sorry,” I say.
“I’m not turning four today.”
I turn away, go back to my room.
They are confused
But a decision has been made.
I’m not growing up and
I’m missing my party.
I’m not turning four today.
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This is the poem I wrote at the beginning of the semester, with great reluctance, since I didn't/don't think of myself as a poet. I just wrote this to get a little chuckle, though it's based on a true story. I think it's pretty weak, so I may not include it in my final ten; I can't think of any way to shore it up. But anyway, tell me what you think of this one, and I'll put a better one up tomorrow.
Thanks.
3 Comments:
i like it but there's something janky about that last few lines. Maybe reverse the order and put "I'm not turning 4 today" last for more dramatic effect.
Okay, i wrote one too, and i'd like you to read it because it kind of jumps around and i need to know if it needs more continuity.
But..."I'm not turning four today" is last...
I'm missing my party.
They are confused
But a decision has been made
I turn away to go back to my room.
“I’m sorry,” I say.
“I’m not turning four today.”
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